Stars do indeed twinkle, I have seen them:
pricked into the blue canvas of the sky,
a flicker of pearl pulsing on the eye
out of the deep velvet dark –
winkingly –
with each its own lustre of light.
The rite of dusk so many nights
unobserved under cityscape smudges
is here piercingly clear –
on the wild of the moorland,
in thick country darknesses.
I fiercely wonder at your brilliance –
and try to claim your light –
eyes full wide
focusing the night.
But I do not know you – you,
light years beyond my ken,
hanging like a symbol or a metaphor
above my head.
You’re dead above me,
your light the last dying glimmer
of your living glamour.
I only know you in your
death throes
so far removed
from the everyday.
O let me look at you this way –
dying beautifully,
eternally,
where I am not known.
The owl’s cry is a tremor
of my wonder,
and voices it better.
Gorgeous images, and the last verse in particular I love, the owl’s cry a tremor of your wonder.
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Thanks Andrea, my favourite too 😉
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There was no space to comment on your “About” page so I’ll comment here. Walking and pausing in nature resonates with me, especially as creative inspiration. I too listened to the Elizabeth Gilbert TED talk and was inspired and challenged. The idea of creative thoughts coming from outside of us is both exciting and a wee bit scary at the same time. And as you say, paths need writing as well as walking. I wish you well in your endeavours and look forward to reading more from you.
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Thanks Denzil, it’s good to find that my passion for walking and creativity is shared 🙂
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Lovely poem with rich, fresh imagery. I look forward to reading more.
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Thank you!
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keep up the good work.
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